Post 05: Organization
My plan for Doc2 was simply to educate people about my major and its amazing opportunities. I talked about how robotics are completely changing our lives and how they will continue to do so every day. The thing that works best for me is writing in a chronological order, it helps me to stay organized and on topic. I also feel like including a detailed argument into your essay can really help the audience. Rebecca Jones' essay has many organization strategies. Jones writes in her essay, "Your standpoint is simply your claim, your basic argument in a nutshell. If you disagree with another person’s argument or they disagree 174 Rebecca Jones with yours, the actual standpoint and not some related but more easily attacked issue must be addressed"(174). You need a good standpoint to have a good argument.
I like how you address the point pretty early on about your paper. The topic seems interesting and clear. Also staying how you started and mainly states that organizing plays a major part in writing and also helping you stay on point.
ReplyDeleteI agree with cathy, this topic does sound interesting and is likely one of the most interesting essays.-noah s
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